

Then I also audited the whole edit, based on a great youtube video essay about “showing, not telling.Silver (charred black) Nobot was a silver-plated protocol droid with white sensors. Consequently, the scenes at Canto Bight are greatly reduced, and Rose and Finn simply do not pilot speeders at the battle of Crait. I loved Rose in TLJ, but without adequate character development in TROS, it was best to minimize her to simply a person helping Finn on HIS character arc. Hux is no spy, simply muscled out by other power hungry commanders. Both simply fade out of importance in the final movie, but I hope I have not made it too obvious. Characters like Hux and Rose have been severely sidelined as they just do not have satisfying character arcs.Admittedly, Finn kinda disappears in the final fight, but there are just too many absurd parts to leave him in (no horses on spaceships in this cut!) Only once does he ask Rey about a boyfriend, from then on he keeps friendship motivations. This means he does not ever make and successful attacks with the lightsaber as well. Poe’s character arc is nowhere near as complex as Kylo, but pretty much laid out for us.She does not hit a stormtrooper with her first shot, and she less powered along the way as much as possible. Kylo’s arc is pretty well fleshed out already, the most cohesive character arc of the ST, imo.Kylo and Rey were of course most important. My goal was to streamline the storylines of the main characters through all three movies, as if the end was planned from the beginning. The Droid dialogue will be replaced so that when they analyze the Dart they discover the toxic poison comes from the Moons of Bogden.)Īnakin and Padme speak with Dooku on Geonosis.Īnakin and Padme are sentenced to death by Poggle on Geonosis. Obi Wan with Analysis droids (This scene now takes place on Kamino after he talks to Jango Fett. Obi Wan and Mace Windu on the landing platform as Obi Wan is leaving for Kamino.


The scene now comes in between Anakin returning with the dead body of his mother and her funeral). Various cuts and trims to Anakins dialogue to create a stronger character and beter romantic arc with Padme.Īnakin and Padme traveling to Naboo as refugees.Īll the Naboo scenes (with the exception of the Fireside Conversation scene which now will take place on the Lars Moisture farm on Tatooine. Obi Wan's investigation into Kamino and who created the clone army has him doing more detective work, gathering more clues and now has a satisfying conclusion to the Sifo Dyas mystery. In the Jedi council scene Mace Windu now does not tell Anakin to take Padme to Naboo instead Yoda tells him to hide out on Tatooine with Padme.įrom Padme packing her bags until the Funeral of Anakin's Mom almost all scenes have been rearranged. The trip to Naboo has been cut and instead Anakin and Padme go straight to Tattoine after leaving Corouscant.
